"progresses" -> "explores" might be more plain and clear. We've already covered it being a dungeon crawler, so just a bit more info has been added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ( talk Following that, you want to give the player a broad sense of the game before you start getting into the details of how healing or character selection works. You also mention the developer but you haven't introduced the developer yet. It's really two fragments joined together by "and", where it could be more grammatical just to use a full stop and separate them. The first sentence in the gameplay section needs a lot of work. 
Going to start with the body and see how far I get. Shooterwalker ( talk) 18:37, 27 September 2021 (UTC) Try to reach me if for some reason I forget.
It might take me through this weekend to find time, but hopefully sooner.
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